If animals rule the world....
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If animals rule the world....
Animals will keep humans in cages. It\'s like a zoo.
Then the animals will come to see the humans and give them food regulary.
While we humans will probably have to perform in front of the animals.
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This is so scary to think about. I think we will be able to do a lot of things. I hope this never happens! -_- Thank you for making your homework. :)
Animals will keep humans in cages. It\'s like a zoo.
>> Correct.
Then the animals will come to see the humans and give them food regulary.
>> Then the animals will come to see these humans and give them food regularly.
While we humans will probably have to perform in front of the animals.
>> While we, humans, will probably have to perform in front of the animals.
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