If given a chance to travel to the moon, do you want to go? Why or why not?
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No, I don't want to travel to the moon. Because I'm afraid of going there. While I am heading to the moon and since I am there, I might keep myself nervous on if I can be back to the earth or not. I don't want to have that kind of feeling. If we want to know some information on it, we can learn it from an unmanned probe.
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While I am heading to the moon and since I am there, I might keep myself nervous on if I can be back to the earth or not.
>>> While I am heading to the moon and reached there, I might keep myself worried if I can go back to earth or not.
If we want to know some information on it, we can learn it from an unmanned probe.
>>>If we want to know some information about it, we can learn it from an unmanned probe.
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