If given the chance, what policies in Korea do you wish to change? Why?
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If I have a power to change the policy in my country, I\'d like to change English education system. Most Korean student spend a lot of time and money for preparing English exam rather than speaking or writing. They should have a chance to practice practical English. Therefore, I will add speaking or writing part in English exam like TOEFL.
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Here are some things to take note of:
1. If I have a power to change the policy in my country, I\'d like to change English education system.
>>If I had the power to change a policy in my country, I\'d like to change the English education system.
2. Most Korean student spend a lot of time and money for preparing English exam rather than speaking or writing.
>>Most Korean students spend a lot of time and money preparing for their English exams rather than speaking or writing.
3. They should have a chance to practice practical English.
>>CORRECT!
4. Therefore, I will add speaking or writing part in English exam like TOEFL.
>>Therefore, I will add speaking or writing part in English exams like TOEFL.
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