If I am going to collect.
학생이 쓴 원문
I would like to collect plates.
Many women are interested in plates.
Pretty plate gives me pleasure of cooking.
But my house doesn’t have space to put many dishes.
And It takes a lot of money.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]ny!
Wow, that\'s a great idea, but I thought it was for visitors that\'s why you wanted to collect plates. haha!
Anyway, do anything that brings you happiness.
Have a good time!
Aki~
I would like to collect plates.
>>> CORRECT!
Many women are interested in plates.
>>> CORRECT!
Pretty plate gives me pleasure of cooking.
>>> Pretty plates give me the pleasure of cooking.
But my house doesn’t have space to put many dishes.
>>> CORRECT!
And It takes a lot of money.
>>> CORRECT!
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