If I am living abroad, what is the food that I miss most from home?
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Maybe I miss most naengmyeon and bingsu if I live abroad.
>> Maybe, I will miss naengmyeon and bingsu the most if I am living abroad.
Naengmyeon is an noodle which is very cold and tastes sour.
>> Naengmyeon is a kind of noodles which is very cold and it tastes sour.
Bingsu is a dessert made by ice flakes and syrups.
>> Bingsu is a dessert made with ice flakes and syrups.
The reason why I anticipate this way is that I actually experienced when I traveled to Europe for 3 weeks.
>> The reason why I anticipate this way is that I actually experienced it when I traveled to Europe for 3 weeks.
In Europe, there wasn\'t cold noodle like naengmyeon and cold dessert like bingsu despite the weather was very hot.
>> In Europe, there wasn\'t any cold noodles like naengmyeon and cold dessert like bingsu despite the very hot weather.
So, I really wanted to go back home and eat these two dishes.
>> So, I really wanted to go back home and eat those two dishes.
If I traveled to Europe in winter, I would miss kalbi stew.
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However, I think there is a kind of kalbi stew in other countries so I wouldn\'t really miss the dish.
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In addition, my aunt who lives abroad eats bingsu whenever she comes back to Korea.
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Thus, I think most Korean people as well as I would miss naenmyeon and bingsu if they live abroad.
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