If i become very rich man, then I will have my restaurant
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Building restaurant is very expensive. So unless I become a very rich man or be chef I think it\'s impossible to have my own restaurant. However, there are not bad things about having my own restaurant if I am a rich man. I can eat delicious food in my restaurant. In addition, I can also decorate this restaurant to my style like cafe. In conclusion, If I have lots of money then I want to have my own restaurant.
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Building restaurant is very expensive.
>> Building a restaurant is very expensive.
So unless I become a very rich man or be chef I think it\'s impossible to have my own restaurant.
>> Unless I become a very rich man or a chef, I think it\'s impossible to have my own restaurant.
However, there are not bad things about having my own restaurant if I am a rich man.
>> However, if I were a rich man, there wouldn\'t be anything bad about having my own restaurant.
I can eat delicious food in my restaurant.
>> I could eat delicious food in my restaurant.
In addition, I can also decorate this restaurant to my style like cafe.
>> In addition, I could also add a café in the restaurant.
In conclusion, If I have lots of money then I want to have my own restaurant.
>> In conclusion, if I had lots of money, I would want to have my own restaurant.
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