if i can change my personality
학생이 쓴 원문
If I can change one of my personalities, it is perfect to everything.
This personality can work perfectly without mistakes when i am woking on it.
Sometimes I get so stressed out.
Habits that i always check and check sometimes make my body and mind tired.
It can\'t be easily fixed, but if I can change it, I want to change my personality and live.
But I think it helped a lot when I made plans or prepared for my itinerary.
강사 첨삭
Hi Evan:)
Being a perfectionist has advantages and disadvantages. My advice for you is balance this personality of yours. :) You don\'t necessarily have to get rid of it. Just pick situations where this trait would be suitable.
Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.
-Teacher EliseIf I can change one of my personalities, it is perfect to everything.
>> If I can change one of my personalities, it would be being a perfectionist.
This personality can work perfectly without mistakes when i am woking on it.
>> This personality of mine it when I want to work without making mistakes.
Sometimes I get so stressed out.
>> Sometimes I get so stressed out because of this trait of mine.
Habits that i always check and check sometimes make my body and mind tired.
>> I have this habit that I always check something multiple time resulting to my body and mind getting exhausted,
It can\'t be easily fixed, but if I can change it, I want to change my personality and live.
>> It can\'t be easily fixed, but I am willing to try to make my life better.
But I think it helped a lot when I made plans or prepared for my itinerary.
>> But I think that at some point, this personality of mine helped me when it comes to planning and preparing my itineraries.
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