If I can choose only one city, that city must be Seoul

2013-12-13 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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If I can choose only one city, that city must be Seoul. because there are lots of people living in seoul. Seoul is not a big city but it has many people. It means there are many demand for food, cosmetics, entertainments. actually It's true. there are many things to enjoy. when you need to eat traditional food, you can go to conventional market. of course there are amusement part too. and you can reach to Mt. nam where you can find Tower of Mt. nam. when you want to feel the youth, visiting Hyehaw in seoul, which is famous for university road. you can see a play and dance. if food in korea is not in your favor, it's better to go Etaewon where you can eat exotic food. of course there are music festivals in seoul. whenever visit our capital, seoul, you can see a many crowd. and that means, there are lots of things to enjoy and play.

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A fun filled Friday [이름]! Wow! I want to go to Seoul! I heard a lot of things about it and I\'m wondering how does it look like during rush hour? Thank you for sending this in. ^^ I really appreciate your time and effort. I learned something today, especially the places where you can eat exotic foods. Have you tried it? How was the experience? See you later in class. Take care!Teacher Nina   If I can choose only one city, that city must be Seoul. >> If I can only choose one city. it must be Seoul.because there are lots of people living in seoul. >> It is because there are lots of people living in Seoul. >> OR: It is because there are many people living there.Seoul is not a big city but it has many people. >> Did you mean: Seoul is not a big city but there are a lot of people living there.It means there are many demand for food, cosmetics, entertainments. >> It means that the demand for food, cosmetics and enteraintment gadgets is high. >> OR: It means that there is a high demand for food, cosmetics and entertainment gadgets.actually It\'s true. there are many things to enjoy. >> Correct >> OR: Actually, it\'s true. There are many things to enjoy.when you need to eat traditional food, you can go to conventional market. >> When you need to eat traditional food, you can go to a conventional market.of course there are amusement part too. and you can reach to Mt. nam where you can find Tower of Mt. nam.>> Did you mean: Of course, there are amusement parks too. And you can go to Mt. Nam where you can find the tower. when you want to feel the youth, visiting Hyehaw in seoul, which is famous for university road. you can see a play and dance. >> Did you mean: When you want to see the youth, you can visit Hyehaw in Seoul which is famouse for university roads and you can watch plays and dances. if food in korea is not in your favor, it\'s better to go Etaewon where you can eat exotic food. >> If you don\'t prefer eating Korean food, it\'s better to go to Etaewon where you can eat exotic food. >> OR: If food the food in Korea is not your interest, it\'s better to go to Etaewon where you can eat exotic food. >> OR: If you don\'t like eating Korean food, it\'s better to go to Etaewon where you can eat exotic food.of course there are music festivals in seoul. >> Correct >> OR: Of course, there are music festivals in Seoul.whenever visit our capital, seoul, you can see a many crowd. >> Whenever you visit the capital city, Seoul, you can see many crowd. >> OR: Whenever you go to the capital city, Seoul, you can see a lot of people.and that means, there are lots of things to enjoy and play. >> Correct

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