If I can, I want to do Climbing once.
학생이 쓴 원문
My coworker teacher is doing climbing from last autumn. She said that it is hard activity but is interesting and can make stress out. So I think that I want to try to do once someday, if I can. Of course she is young but I\'m not. ^^ And I don\'t want to do lastingly. Just do it once.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ju [이름]. I\'m happy to hear you are considering mountain climbing.^^ Good luck with that and tell me once you have accomplished it and talk about your experience. Thank you once again for your homework. Well done! I\'ll talk to you in class tomorrow. ~ Teacher Jane c\",)
My coworker teacher is doing climbing from last autumn.
>> My coworker has been mountain climbing since last autumn.
She said that it is hard activity but is interesting and can make stress out.
>> She said that it is a hard activity but it is interesting and cane relieve stress.
So I think that I want to try to do once someday, if I can.
>> So I think that I want to try to do it once someday if I can.
Of course she is young but I\'m not. ^^
>> Of course, she is young but I\'m not. ^^
And I don\'t want to do lastingly.
>> And I don\'t want to do it for a long time.
Just do it once.
>> I just want to do it once.
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