If I can invent something

2022-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If I can invent anything, I should make teleporting merchine. I think the most tiresome thing is moving to another place to place. When I prepare go to outside, I should spend my time 1hour. Take a shower, Make up, hair dry..... Women are so tiresome, every women usually agree my opinion.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ann:)

Yes, this is true! We spend a lot of time to prepare ourselves for certain things. A teleporting machine can be very handy.

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If I can invent anything, I should make teleporting merchine.

>> If I can invent anything, I will make a teleporting machine.

I think the most tiresome thing is moving to another place to place.

>> I think the most tiresome thing is moving from one place to another.

When I prepare go to outside, I should spend my time 1hour.

>> When I go outside, I should an hour of my time.

Take a shower, Make up, hair dry.....

>> I should take a shower, do my make-up and dry my hair.

Women are so tiresome, every women usually agree my opinion.

>> Women are tiresome and most is is agree on this opinion.

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