If I can live other city

2022-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

학생이 쓴 원문

If I can live other city at South Korea, I\'ll choose Gangwondo Samchuck. It\'s my father\'s work place. So my parents live there now. Sometimes when I stay at home alone, it is feel so lonely. My older brother can not come back to home early time. And then usually I was sletp first and my brother came back to the home. Everyday I miss my parents. That\'s why I pick the Samchuck.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ann:)

Great pick! You will enjoy there for sure. Plus, you would have more time with your parents.

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If I can live other city at South Korea, I\'ll choose Gangwondo Samchuck.

>> If I can live other city in South Korea, I\'ll choose Gangwondo, Samchuck.

It\'s my father\'s work place.
>> CORRECT

So my parents live there now.

>> CORRECT

Sometimes when I stay at home alone, it is feel so lonely.

>> CORRECT

My older brother can not come back to home early time.

>>My older brother doesn\'t come home at an early time.

And then usually I was sletp first and my brother came back to the home.

>> I usually sleep first before my brother comes home.

Everyday I miss my parents.

>> I miss my parents everyday.

That\'s why I pick the Samchuck.

>> That\'s why I pick Samchuck.

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