If I can remove one of subjects in my school\'s curriculum

2019-08-16 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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I really want to remove the subject named Logical Circuit Design and Experiment. I learned this subject in the first semester of the second grade and it was very difficult. This subject was filled with complicated circuitry and I just couldn\'t understand it. I studied hard in my own way, but strangely I couldn\'t grasp the concept well in my head. After all, I didn\'t really understand this subject until the end of the semester and my grades were terrible. For that reason, I really want to get rid of this subject.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Lily! ^^,)

We discussed earlier that some lessons/topics in school aren\'t really necessary.

I hope you\'ll have a fun and safe weekend. Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.

See you on Monday!^^


_T. Mayleen :)


I really want to remove the subject named Logical Circuit Design and Experiment.

>>> I really want to remove the subject called \'Logical Circuit Design and Experiment\'.

I learned this subject in the first semester of the second grade and it was very difficult.

>>> I studied this subject in the first semester of my second grade and it was very difficult.

This subject was filled with complicated circuitry and I just couldn\'t understand it.

>>> Correct!

I studied hard in my own way, but strangely I couldn\'t grasp the concept well in my head.

>>> I studied hard on my own way, but unfortunately, I couldn\'t grasp the concept well in my head.

After all, I didn\'t really understand this subject until the end of the semester and my grades were terrible.

>>> Correct!

For that reason, I really want to get rid of this subject.

>>> Correct!

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