If I can remove one of subjects in my school\'s curriculum
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Good evening, Lily! ^^,)
We discussed earlier that some lessons/topics in school aren\'t really necessary.
I hope you\'ll have a fun and safe weekend. Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.
See you on Monday!^^
_T. Mayleen :)
I really want to remove the subject named Logical Circuit Design and Experiment.
>>> I really want to remove the subject called \'Logical Circuit Design and Experiment\'.
I learned this subject in the first semester of the second grade and it was very difficult.
>>> I studied this subject in the first semester of my second grade and it was very difficult.
This subject was filled with complicated circuitry and I just couldn\'t understand it.
>>> Correct!
I studied hard in my own way, but strangely I couldn\'t grasp the concept well in my head.
>>> I studied hard on my own way, but unfortunately, I couldn\'t grasp the concept well in my head.
After all, I didn\'t really understand this subject until the end of the semester and my grades were terrible.
>>> Correct!
For that reason, I really want to get rid of this subject.
>>> Correct!
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