if i can speak foreign language well

2020-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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if i could speak a foreign language well, in my country, it would be good at job hunting ! especially, design, it is most important thing that express one\'s thought to other people so if i could express my feeling and thinking , it would be very competivite in my field And if i could speak foreign language, i would get a second job for teaching language! lol in my small part of my mind i want to get little bit more money and i\'m teaching student, and sharing what i know with someone is very good thing

강사 첨삭

Hi Cherry!

I love how you express yourself in writing.

You have included a lot of details.

Make sure to keep your sentences simple next time.

It would be better for clarity and understanding.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

if i could speak a foreign language well, in my country, it would be good at job hunting !

>> If i could speak a foreign language well, it would be good for job hunting in my country.
especially, design, it is most important thing that express one\'s thought to other people

>> This is especially true for design which is the most important thing that could express one\'s thought to other people.
so if i could express my feeling and thinking , it would be very competivite in my field

>> If I could express my emotions and thoughts, it would be very competitive in my field.
And if i could speak foreign language, i would get a second job for teaching language!

>> If i could speak a foreign language, I would get a second job for teaching language!
lol in my small part of my mind i want to get little bit more money

>> A small part of me wants to earn a little bit of money.
and i\'m teaching student, and sharing what i know with someone is very good thing

>> Teaching students and sharing what I know with someone is a very good thing.

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