If I could be a celebrity
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If I could be a celebrity for a day I want to be BTS. I can’t imagine their life is like and I want to perform on the stage which is really huge. Also I think they have a lot of pressure because they are at the top. I want to know how they feel.
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If I could be a celebrity for a day I want to be BTS.
>>If I could be a celebrity for a day, I want to be BTS.
I can’t imagine their life is like and I want to perform on the stage which is really huge.
>> I can’t imagine what their life is like and I want to perform on the stage which is really huge.
Also I think they have a lot of pressure because they are at the top.
>>CORRECT
I want to know how they feel.
>>CORRECT
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