If I could be an animal
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If I could be an animal, I would like to be be a dog. I want to be a dog because, One of my favorite animal is dog, and many people pet a dog. (But I would like to be a puppy more than adult dog)
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Hi Layla!^^
Thank you for submitting your homework.
If I could be an animal, I will choose to be a bird.
Birds can fly and can go to different places.
See you on Monday. :)
Teacher Andrea
If I could be an animal, I would like to be be a dog.
>> If I could be an animal, I would choose to become a dog.
I want to be a dog because, One of my favorite animal is dog, and many people pet a dog.
>> One of my favorite animal is dog so I want to become one, in addition, many people has pet dogs.
(But I would like to be a puppy more than adult dog)
>> But I want to be a puppy more than an adult dog.
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