If I could be born at a different time period..
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If I could be born at a different time period, I would want to born in Joseon Dynasty. I would like to wear Korean traditional clothes, Hanbok and live in the traditional house, Hanoak. I want to feel the Korean traditional feelings. I think it would be beautiful and natural.
Additionally, I want to meet King Sejong ,one of the admirable kings, whom I respect most.
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1. If I could be born at a different time period, I would want to born in Joseon Dynasty.
>>CORRECT
OR>>If I were to be born in a different time, I would want to born during Joseon Dynasty.
2. I would like to wear Korean traditional clothes, Hanbok and live in the traditional house, Hanoak.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I would like to wear Hanbok, Korean\'s traditional clothes and live in Hanoak,Korean\'s traditional house.
3. I want to feel the Korean traditional feelings.
>>I want to feel the Korean traditional environment.
4. I think it would be beautiful and natural.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I think it would be beautiful and the place is very natural.
5. Additionally, I want to meet King Sejong ,one of the admirable kings, whom I respect most.
>>Additionally, I want to meet King Sejong ,one of the admirable kings of Korea, whom I respect most.
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