If i could be reincarnated..
학생이 쓴 원문
If I can be reborn, I want to be an honest politician.
When i kooked at government\'s failed policies and corrupt politicians now, I think one politician is having a lot of influence to the people and controlling their lives.
There\'s a word like this.
One smart person can save hundreds of people.
I want to develop the South Korea by living a life of an smart politician.
I asked this same question to my wife.
Contrary to what I thought, my wife wants to be born as a fire-fly.
The reason was that she wants to live a wonderful shining day until died.
강사 첨삭
Hi Evan :)
Some people want to live a different life and some don\'t. At the end of the day, what matters is that we should be contented with the life that we have right now. :)
PS: I actually agree with you that there are a lot of manipulating and corrupt politicians right now.
I also think that your wife\'s idea is cute hahaha.
If I can be reborn, I want to be an honest politician.
>> CORRECT
When i kooked at government\'s failed policies and corrupt politicians now, I think one politician i having a lot of influence to the people and controlling their lives.
>> When I look at the government\'s failed policies and corrupt politicians now, I think the a politician can really affect and control a lot of lives.
There\'s a word like this.
>> CORRECT
One smart person can save hundreds of people.
>> CORRECT
I want to develop the South Korea by living a life of an smart politician.
>> I want to develop South Korea by living a life as a smart politician.
I asked this same question to my wife.
>> CORRECT
Contrary to what I thought, my wife wants to be born as a fire-fly.
>> CORRECT
The reason was that she wants to live a wonderful shining day until died.
>> The reason was that she wants to live as wonderful shining bug until she dies.
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