If I could change one thing about my past, what would it be?

2019-04-05 · 첨삭 강사 Michelle

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When I had been in France 30 years ago. I had to finish my Master of Education Instead of working at a travel agency. If I have finished my studies, I would have been an education minister now.

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Hello [이름]! Thank you for answering your homework! I really appreciate that you shared to me this. Keep it up! (^^,)


When I had been in France 30 years ago.

>>> I have been to France 30 years ago.


 I had to finish my Master of Education.

>>> CORRECT!


 Instead of working at a travel agency.

>>> But instead of that, I worked in a travel agency.


 If I have finished my studies, I would have been an education minister now.

>>> CORRECT!


_T MICHELLE_


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