If I could fly anywhere in the world where would you go and why?

2017-10-19 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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Well. Let`s starts with Jeju-island. It is most popular place, where be loved by korean. Sadly,I never had been to Jeju before. And Japan. I want to fly in snow season at Osaka or Fukuoka. How fantasitic it does, fly with snow!! And Jupiter with no sense of sciece(I mean I could die without oxygen. so let`s assume I may live without oxygen) Just counts universe as world. hahaha

강사 첨삭



Hi Lion, Good evening!

Thank your for your humorous answer. Haha! Jupiter is a good planet to fly to, but I think, I\'d rather fly to planet Neptune. ^-^

Please don\'t forget to check the few corrections I made. Thank you.

See you tomorrow!

Amanda!


Well. Let`s starts with Jeju-island.

>> Well, let\'s start with Jeju-island.


It is most popular place, where be loved by korean. Sadly,I never had been to Jeju before. 

>> It is the most popular place for Koreans to go. Sadly, I\'ve  never been to Jeju before. 

And Japan. I want to fly in snow season at Osaka or Fukuoka. How fantasitic it does, fly with snow!!

>> I would like to go to Japan, too. I want to fly during the snow season in Osaka or Fukuoka. How fantasitic it would be to fly through the snow!

And Jupiter with no sense of sciece (I mean I could die without oxygen. so let`s assume I may live without oxygen)

>> I\'m also interested in flying to planet Jupiter. I would probably die without oxygen,  so let\'s assume  that I am invincible enough to live without oxygen.

 Just counts universe as world. hahaha

>> Let\'s just imagine that everything is the same in the universe and the world. Hahaha!




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