If I could fly anywhere in the world where would you go and why?
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Hi Lion, Good evening!
Thank your for your humorous answer. Haha! Jupiter is a good planet to fly to, but I think, I\'d rather fly to planet Neptune. ^-^
Please don\'t forget to check the few corrections I made. Thank you.
See you tomorrow!
Amanda!
Well. Let`s starts with Jeju-island.
>> Well, let\'s start with Jeju-island.
It is most popular place, where be loved by korean. Sadly,I never had been to Jeju before.
>> It is the most popular place for Koreans to go. Sadly, I\'ve never been to Jeju before.
And Japan. I want to fly in snow season at Osaka or Fukuoka. How fantasitic it does, fly with snow!!
>> I would like to go to Japan, too. I want to fly during the snow season in Osaka or Fukuoka. How fantasitic it would be to fly through the snow!
And Jupiter with no sense of sciece (I mean I could die without oxygen. so let`s assume I may live without oxygen)
>> I\'m also interested in flying to planet Jupiter. I would probably die without oxygen, so let\'s assume that I am invincible enough to live without oxygen.
Just counts universe as world. hahaha
>> Let\'s just imagine that everything is the same in the universe and the world. Hahaha!
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