If I could go back in my late thirties or early forties
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When I started my own first business, my academy in 1996, I was busy managing and expanding my business. In my late thirties and forties, I had been in a severe workaholic. Even on weekends, I would work in my academy. I was once running my three academies. I didn\'t make enough time to be with my two daughters. I always feel guilty for that and regret those days. If I could go back to those days, I would advise myself to spend much more time with your family, especially with your daughters. And I would advise myself to take care of myself.
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Happy Wednesday, Gi [이름]!
I cannot imagine how much of a workaholic you are since you mentioned that you managed three academies at the same time. Nevertheless, the good thing is you still have now, the time to spend with your daughters and based on your stories, I know that you are doing your best to maximize your time with them.
- T. Caitlyn
When I started my own first business, my academy in 1996, I was busy managing and expanding my business.
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In my late thirties and forties, I had been in a severe workaholic.
>> In my late thirties and forties, I was a severe workaholic.
Even on weekends, I would work in my academy.
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I was once running my three academies.
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I didn\'t make enough time to be with my two daughters.
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I always feel guilty for that and regret those days.
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If I could go back to those days, I would advise myself to spend much more time with your family, especially with your daughters.
>> If I could go back to those days, I would advise myself to spend much more time with my family, especially with my daughters.
And I would advise myself to take care of myself.
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