If I could have 30 hours a day.....!
학생이 쓴 원문
If I had 30 hours a day, I would jump with excitement.
Because I am studying English these days, I do not have enough time to play.
So I will play more and study more.
강사 첨삭
Keep safe [이름]! I like the idea of having more time for our self. I wish we could have it. ^_^
If I had 30 hours a day, I would jump with excitement.
>> Correct.
Because I am studying English these days, I do not have enough time to play.
>> It is because I am studying English these days, I do not have enough time to play.
So I will play more and study more.
>> So, I will play more and study more.
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