If I could have chosen any job, I wanted to be an astrophysicist.
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Hi Da [이름],
Your passion for astrophysics and stars is truly inspiring! It\'s amazing how early experiences, like lying under the stars as a child, can shape our interests and aspirations. Keep exploring your love for the cosmos, and who knows, you might find a way to incorporate it into your future!
~Teacher Cathy
I wanted to be an astrophysicist if I could choose any job in the world.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I would have chosen to be an astrophysicist if I could pick any job in the world.
Because I really liked stars.
>>Because I really like stars.
When I was young, I lived in a rural rooftop room, If I couldn\'t sleep, I liked lying on the outside and sleeping while looking at the stars.
>>CORRECT
OR>>As a child, living in a rural area, I would lie on the rooftop and gaze at the stars when I couldn\'t sleep.
Because the moon and stars twinkling in the sky looked really pretty to me.
>>CORRECT
OR>>The twinkling moon and stars in the sky always looked so beautiful to me.
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