If I could have one superpower, I could communicate with animals.(especially my puppies)

Hi, [이름]-Lin!
Thank you very much for taking the time to answer our essay question. ^^

I find your answer fascinating because I have dogs and cats at home too.
I think many people like you want to become dog whisperers. ^_^

It would be really nice if we could understand our pets on a deeper level.

By the way, you did well in writing this essay. Please make sure that you capitalize the first letter of the word in your sentences. :)
See you again in class later. ^^
Take care. :)
~Charry

If I could have one supperpower, I could communicate with my puppies^^
>> If I could have one super power, I would like to have the power to communicate with my puppies. ^^
I have two lovely puppies.
>> CORRECT!
one is pomeranian dog he has white hair and very cute.

>> One is a Pomeranian dog. He has white hair and is very cute. 

OR >> One is a white and very cute Pomeranian dog. 
the ohter one is puddle she has gray hair and very pretty.

>> The other one is Poodle. She has gray hair and is very pretty.

OR >> The other one is a Poodle with gray hair and is unbelievably pretty.
Here is my dogs photo!! ( I uproot the photo)
>> Here are my dogs\' photos! (I uploaded the photos)
sometimes, I feel very sad or negative feelings.

>> Sometimes, I feel very sad or have negative feelings.
at that time, they come to me and keep smile and hug me.

>> During those times, they come to me to make me smile and hug me.
so, I think they can catch my emotion.

>> So, I think they can recognize my negative emotions.
but I can\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'t read their mind and emotion.

>> But I can\'t read their minds and emotions.
If they were sick or sad, I want to know that how they feel like, and therapy them.

>> If they are sick or sad, I want to know how they feel and what therapy is appropriate for them.
that\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'s why If I could have one superpower, I want to have that capacity.
>> That\'s why if I could have one superpower, I want to have that capacity.
thank you for reading my essay so far.

>> Thank you for reading my essay so far.
bye charry ^^ !! 

>> Bye Charry! ^^
have a good night!!!

>> Have a good night!!!