If I could invent anything, I would invent..
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If I could invent anything, I would invent a portable teleport device because I’d like to do something more constructive instead of spending nearly one and half hours on the road every day. I won’t be a time traveler but I want to spare my time.
Ally! In class yesterday, what I wanted to say was that I went camping on the weekend before last!
The time, day, night, week, month, year before last
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Hey there [이름]!
Oh okay! Now I understand. ^^
I agree with your idea about the invention.
I would also love to use that teleportation device to get to places faster.
I hope someday that invention actually gets invented. ^^
~~t. Ally
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If I could invent anything, I would invent a portable teleport device because I’d like to do something more constructive instead of spending nearly one and half hours on the road every day.
>> CORRECT!
I won’t be a time traveler but I want to spare my time.
>> CORRECT!
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