If I could live anywhere, where would it be
학생이 쓴 원문
When I went to canada I saw many beautiful places. And also canada has great fresh air. So I want to live in canada. In canada, there are many big forests. This wonderful grandeur was make me happy. When I become an adult, I will live in canada.
강사 첨삭
(Part 3)
When I went to canada I saw many beautiful places. And also canada has great fresh air. So I want to live in canada. In canada, there are many big forests. This wonderful grandeur was make me happy. When I become an adult, I will live in canada.
When I went to Canada, I saw many beautiful places, it has also a great fresh air so I want to live in Canada. Also, there are many big forests and this wonderful grandeur made me happy. When I become an adult, I will live in Canada.
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