If I could make one change to the world...
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear.Selene
If I could make one change to the world, I would take care of dinosaur.
Because my son love them. So we will play happy together.
Then my son will very joyful.
Thank you. ^^
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!^^
Thank you for doing your homework. Continue practicing your English skills. ^_^
If I could make one change to the world, I would take care of dinosaur.
>>>If I could make one change to the world, I would take care of dinosaurs.
Because my son love them. So we will play happy together.
Because my son love them. So we will play happy together.
>>> It\'s because my son loves them and we will play together joyfully.
Then my son will very joyful.
Then my son will very joyful.
>>> Then, my son will be very happy.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.