If I could meet any famous person, dead or alive.
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to meet BTS if I could meet any famous person. I ‘m not sure that I would have a chance to meet BTS. There are lots of things I want to ask to them. I want to hear some advice and learn some skills that can help me with doing this job. And I just want to tell them you guys are my rile model.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Omg, I want to meet them too! :( Maybe someday you would get the chance to meet them, right? Let\'s hope for the best. Anyways, thank you for sharing.
-Teacher Elise
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I want to meet BTS if I could meet any famous person.
>> CORRECT
I ‘m not sure that I would have a chance to meet BTS.
>> I\'m not sure if I would have the chance to meet them.
There are lots of things I want to ask to them.
>> There are a lot of things I want to ask them
I want to hear some advice and learn some skills that can help me with doing this job.
>>CORRECT
And I just want to tell them you guys are my rile model.
>> And I just want to tell them that they are my role models.
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