If I could shop for free at one store...
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If I could shop for free at one store, I will choose a jewelry store such as Tiffany & Co. Jewelry is very expensive, so it\'s no wonder that I choose that. Of course, I love a jewelry accessaries. I feel good just taking it, and I just like something shiny. If someone ask me to choose one thing from necklace, earrings, rings, etc, I can\'t choose it. That\'s how much I like all them. It\'s wonderful to think that such the place is for free.
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Hi Kate!
You are just getting better every day.
This is a good start for the week.
I hope we will have a productive week.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
If I could shop for free at one store, I will choose a jewelry store such as Tiffany & Co.
>> Correct
Jewelry is very expensive, so it\'s no wonder that I choose that.
>> Correct
Of course, I love a jewelry accessaries.
>> Of course, I love jewelry accessories.
I feel good just taking it, and I just like something shiny.
>> Correct
If someone ask me to choose one thing from necklace, earrings, rings, etc, I can\'t choose it.
>> If someone asks me to choose one thing among necklaces, earrings, rings, etc., I wouldn\'t be able to choose.
That\'s how much I like all them.
>> Correct
It\'s wonderful to think that such the place is for free.
>> It\'s wonderful to think that such a place is for free.
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