If I could stop time, what would I do and why?

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If I can stop time, I will draw strange thing on the face that tease me.

>> If I can stop time, I will draw something strange on the faces of the people who always tease me.
Expecially boy.

>> I would do it especially for boys.

They always tease me like called my nickname.

>> They keep calling me names.
If they called my nickname, I feel very angry and I want revange them.

>> Whenever they do that, I feel angry and I want to get back at them.
So, I want draw strage thing on their face,

>> That\'s why I want to draw strange things on their faces.
 and I think it is very funny thing!

>> I think it would be very funny.