If I do hard volunteer, they can get a big happiness!
학생이 쓴 원문
I think what volunteering can give people is a happiness. In fact, happiness comes to both those who do volunteer work and those who receive it. As I done volunteer work, happiness comes when the other person says \"thank you\". As soon as I hear that, I think, \"It\'s worth the hard work.\" It was every time. Of course, among those who volunteer, there are people who are very bothered about doing volunteer work and do not like to do it. Such people are not happy. But like me, when your volunteer work is over, if you do it while looking forward to the words “Thank you” and “You did a great job,” and sweat dripping, the more you work, the greater the reward! It\'s very happy
강사 첨삭
Hi Maria!
I think that when you are a kind person, volunteering is a piece of cake. First of all, volunteering means that you are willing and happy about the work you are doing. When you feel stressed and tired, that is work and not volunteering. Find joy in helping others and you do not have to work so hard during volunteer work.
Someday, I hope you will find more meaning in doing volunteer work as well as learn much insights from this activity as well.
Well done!
-T. Donna =)
>> I think what volunteering can give people is happiness.
In fact, happiness comes to both those who do volunteer work and those who receive it.
>> Correct!
As I done volunteer work, happiness comes when the other person says \"thank you\".
>> When I\'ve done volunteer work, happiness comes when the other person says \"thank you\".
As soon as I hear that, I think, \"It\'s worth the hard work.\" It was every time.
>> Correct!
Of course, among those who volunteer, there are people who are very bothered about doing volunteer work and do not like to do it.
>> Correct!
Such people are not happy.
>> Correct!
But like me, when your volunteer work is over, if you do it while looking forward to the words “Thank you” and “You did a great job,” and sweat dripping, the more you work, the greater the reward!
>> Correct!
It\'s very happy
>> Correct!
Or: It\'s very happy./ It makes me very happy.
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