If I go to the past, What am I doing!

2014-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Becca

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I don't want to go to the past, because I must do the exam again. If I go to the past, I want to travel to the world. Past can be 10yaers, 100year ago so I want to look the world in past. And I want to meet my parents. I want to see age of my parents's student! (...And I want to learn about 'How to take carry about your child' kkkk)

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Hello [이름]!   Thanks for sending in this one right after class. I also want to travel the world, and maybe go back to the things I\'ve done. I want to have a chance to correct my mistakes and change the future. kkkk See you in class!   ~Teacher Becca~   Here are some corrections:   If I go to the past, What am I doing! >> If I can go back to the past, what I am going to do? I don\'t want to go to the past, because I must do the exam again. >> I don\'t want to go back to the past because I must take my exams again. If I go to the past, I want to travel to the world. >> If I can go back to the past, I want to travel the world.Past can be 10yaers, 100year ago so I want to look the world in past. >> The past can be somewhere 10 or 100 years back, and I want to view the world in the past.And I want to meet my parents. >> And I also want to meet my parents.I want to see age of my parents\'s student! >> I want to see my parents as students!(...And I want to learn about \'How to take carry about your child\' kkkk) >> (And I want to learn about how to take care of your child. kkkk)

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