If I go to the past, What am I doing!
학생이 쓴 원문
I don't want to go to the past, because I must do the exam again.
If I go to the past, I want to travel to the world.
Past can be 10yaers, 100year ago so I want to look the world in past.
And I want to meet my parents.
I want to see age of my parents's student!
(...And I want to learn about 'How to take carry about your child' kkkk)
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thanks for sending in this one right after class.
I also want to travel the world, and maybe go back to the things I\'ve done.
I want to have a chance to correct my mistakes and change the future. kkkk
See you in class!
~Teacher Becca~
Here are some corrections:
If I go to the past, What am I doing!
>> If I can go back to the past, what I am going to do?
I don\'t want to go to the past, because I must do the exam again.
>> I don\'t want to go back to the past because I must take my exams again.
If I go to the past, I want to travel to the world.
>> If I can go back to the past, I want to travel the world.Past can be 10yaers, 100year ago so I want to look the world in past.
>> The past can be somewhere 10 or 100 years back, and I want to view the world in the past.And I want to meet my parents.
>> And I also want to meet my parents.I want to see age of my parents\'s student!
>> I want to see my parents as students!(...And I want to learn about \'How to take carry about your child\' kkkk) >> (And I want to learn about how to take care of your child. kkkk)
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