If i Had a chance to talk to a north korea refugee1

2019-10-09 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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If i had a chance to talk to a north korean refugee, I want to ask the reason of their refuge and their life in North Korea. I think they need to share their difficulty with someone. And then, i want to know about their own culture. Because, we have little different cultures despite we are the same race and the same history. And also, I will introduce ours too. At first, I will show them k pop, k drama and k beauty. Because I heard the north korean people really is interested in them.

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If i had a chance to talk to a north korean refugee, I want to ask the reason of their refuge and their life in North Korea.
>>If I had a chance to talk to North Korean refugees, I would like to ask them why they were evacuated and how they lived in the North.
I think they need to share their difficulty with someone.
>>I think they need to share the difficulties with someone.
 And then, i want to know about their own culture.
>>Then, I want to know about their own culture.
 Because, we have little different cultures despite we are the same race and the same history.
>>Because our culture is a little different even though we are of the same race.
And also, I will introduce ours too.
>>Also, I will introduce our culture too.
At first, I will show them k pop, k drama and k beauty.
>>First, I will show them K-pop, K-drama and K-beauty.
Because I heard the north korean people really is interested in them.
>>Because I heard that North Koreans are really interested in them.

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