If I had a few time a day~~
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I will read a book about other country’s history.
I am interested in the culture of other
Country.
I think the history of country influences behavior and thinking of the people.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름]ny!
Reading brings you to many different places especially if it is about other cultures. It makes you understand that we are different from each other and makes us respect people who are not the same as our practices. Thank you for doing your homework every day. I appreciate every effort you do to improve your skill in English.
Have a good day!
Aki~
I think I will read a book about other country’s history.
>>> I think I will read a book about other countries history.
>>> I think I will read a book about another country’s history.
I am interested in the culture of other Country.
>>> I am interested in the culture of other countries.
I think the history of country influences behavior and thinking of the people.
>>> I think the history of a country influences the behavior and thinking of the people.
>>> I think the history of a country influences the behavior and mindset of the people
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