If i had a lot of money, what is the first thing i will buy
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I will buy buildings which have a convenience store , pizza store, clothes store , hair cut store, hospital and big swimming pool.
So i can use them for free!!!
And i also can earn money with them
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WRITING TASK: If you had a lot of money, what is the first thing you will buy?
I will buy buildings which have a convenience store , pizza store, clothes store , hair cut store, hospital and big swimming pool.
>> I will buy a few businesses such as a convenience store, a pizza store, a clothes shop , a salon, a hospital and a big swimming pool.
>> I will buy a few businesses such as a convenience store, a pizza store, a clothes shop , a salon, a hospital and a big swimming pool.
So i can use them for free!!!
>> So I can use them for free!!!
>> So I can use them for free!!!
And i also can earn money with them
>> And I can also earn money with them.
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