If I had incredible wealth
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If I had incredible wealth, I would help others in need including my sisters in law and some of my friends. I would raise the amount of my donations that I give monthly.
And I would purchase larger second house than current one so that I could invite my friends or relatives whenever they want to visit. With the remaining money, I would travel with my husband and daughters.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
I would agree with you! I would do the same if I had incredible wealth. It would be nice to enjoy and help others at the same time.
- T. Caitlyn
If I had incredible wealth, I would help others in need including my sisters-in-law and some of my friends.
>> CORRECT
I would raise the amount of my donations that I give monthly.
>> CORRECT
And I would purchase larger second house than current one so that I could invite my friends or relatives whenever they want to visit.
>> And I would purchase a larger second house than my current one so that I could invite my friends or relatives whenever they want to visit.
With the remaining money, I would travel with my husband and daughters.
>> CORRECT
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