If I had three wishes, I will make it come true.
학생이 쓴 원문
Christmas day is coming.
I have many wish in my mind when I was young.
I have grown up until now and I have actually made many wishes come true.
I have my own car and motor cycle.It\'s great.
And I wish my relatives live well without agony.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. Christmas wish is one of my favorite things to do and I had a great time reading your wishes. I hope it will come true. Keep it up!^_^
I have many wish in my mind when I was young.
>>>I have many wishes in my mind when I was young.
I have grown up until now and I have actually made many wishes come true.
>>>I\'m a grown man now and I have actually made many wishes come true.
I have my own car and motor cycle.
>>>I have my own car and a motorcycle.
And I wish my relatives live well without agony.
>>I also wish that my relatives will live well without agony.
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