If I have a chance to change my job, would i do that??
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Today`s question is that If you are given the chance to change your job Would you do that??
My answer is \"yes, of cause\"
>> My answer is \"yes, of course\"
Even if i am very satisfied with my job, as a elemetary school teacher, I sometimes wished that i would change my job - more freedom and joy things
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Even if I am very satisfied with my job as an elementary school teacher, I sometimes wish that I could change my job where I could have more freedom and joy in doing things.
Bofore i mention the reason why, I would like to explain the life as a teacher.
>> Before I mentioned the reason why, I would like to explain my life as a teacher.
>> Normally, we take days off including vacation.
>> That is one of the advantages of being a teacher.
>> But I\'m sure no one is after the vacation only.
>>
On the other hand, being a teacher also has some shortcomings just like other jobs.
>> Firstly, in Korea, teacher`s pay is not that high compared to other jobs.
It could be a little tough to menage to get along>> It could be a little tough to manage it.
second, We also suffered from too much task to deal with the school except for teaching>> Secondly, we\'re also given too much task in school aside from our teaching assignments.
>> Correct.
So, I have a chance to change my job - i want to be a flight attendent or TV anounser
>> So, I have a chance to change my job - I would like to be a Flight Attendant or a TV Announcer.
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