If I have a chance to change my job, would i do that??

2013-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Today`s question is that If you are given the chance to change your job Would you do that?? My answer is "yes, of cause" Even if i am very satisfied with my job, as a elemetary school teacher, I sometimes wished that i would change my job - more freedom and joy things Bofore i mention the reason why, I would like to explain the life as a teacher. Usually We can take off quite many days, including vacation. That is the one of good advantage of being teacher. But I`m sure no one is in it jsut for the vacation. On the other hand, being teacher also have some shortcoming as well as other jobs first, in korea, teacher`s pay is not that high compared to the current customer price It could be a little tough to menage to get along second, We also suffered from too much task to deal with the school except for teaching Sometimes it could give me lots of stress So, I have a chance to change my job - i want to be a flight attendent or TV anounser

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon! Thank you for giving a detailed answer to the essay.

I agree with you that teaching is not an easy profession. So I salute you! Have a great day!

-Teacher Angel-

Today`s question is that If you are given the chance to change your job Would you do that?? 

My answer is \"yes, of cause\"

>> My answer is \"yes, of course\"

Even if i am very satisfied with my job, as a elemetary school teacher, I sometimes wished that i would change my job - more freedom and joy things

>>  Even if I am very satisfied with my job as an elementary school teacher, I sometimes wish that I could change my job where I could have more freedom and joy in doing things

Bofore i mention the reason why, I would like to explain the life as a teacher. 

>> Before I mentioned the reason why, I would like to explain my life as a teacher. 

Usually We can take off quite many days, including vacation.

>> Normally, we take days off including vacation.

That is the one of good advantage of being teacher.

>> That is one of the advantages of being a teacher.

But I`m sure no one is in it jsut for the vacation.

>> But I\'m sure no one is after the vacation only.

On the other hand, being teacher also have some shortcoming as well as other jobs

>>  On the other hand, being a teacher also has some shortcomings just like other jobs.

first, in korea, teacher`s pay is not that high compared to the current customer price

>> Firstly, in Korea, teacher`s pay is not that high compared to other jobs.

It could be a little tough to menage to get along

>> It could be a little tough to manage it.

second, We also suffered from too much task to deal with the school except for teaching

>> Secondly, we\'re also given too much task in school aside from our teaching assignments.

Sometimes it could give me lots of stress

>> Correct.

So, I have a chance to change my job - i want to be a flight attendent or TV anounser

>> So, I have a chance to change my job - I would like to be a Flight Attendant or a TV Announcer.

 

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