If I have a chance to relocate I would go south east Asia area.
학생이 쓴 원문
Where do you want to be relocated?
As I said in class, If I have a chance to relocate I would go south east Asia area.
I already had a experience living in Europe. During my staying in Europe I don\'t like my differences from others. If I walk in a street, all Germans could know me as Asian because I have a different face and hair color with them.
So I want to live in Asia area if I have a chance. I want to enjoy my life more relax situation.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir JY! Thank you for this. If you enjoy summer season then South East Asia is the place.
- T. Beth
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As I said in class, If I have a chance to relocate I would go south east Asia area.>>> OR: As I said in class, if I have the chance to relocate I would go to South East Asia.
I already had a experience living in Europe.
I already had a experience living in Europe.
>>> I already have an experience living in Europe.
During my staying in Europe I don\'t like my differences from others.
>>> During my stay in Europe, I don\'t like my differences from others.
If I walk in a street, all Germans could know me as Asian because I have a different face and hair color with them.
>>> If I walk on a street, all Germans could know I am [Name] because I have a different face and hair color from them.
So I want to live in Asia area if I have a chance.
>>> So I want to live in Asia if I have a chance.
I want to enjoy my life more relax situation.
>>> I want to enjoy my life in a more relaxed situation.
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