If i have a spend a time with famous person
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If I have a spend a time of one day with famous person, I\'ll with the Beyonce.
Beyonce is my roll model.
When I was middle school 1st grade, I was watched the youtube in Beyonce\'s billboard awards live video and half time show live video.
And then I fall in love in to her.
She\'s live is very powerful and stable.
If I have a spend a time with her, I want vocal and dancing lesson.
And I wonder how about the top stars life.
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Hi Ann:)
Great choice. :)
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If I have a spend a time of one day with famous person, I\'ll with the Beyonce.
>> If I can spend a day with a famous person, it\'ll be Beyoncé.
Beyonce is my roll model.
>> Beyoncé is my role model.
When I was middle school 1st grade, I was watched the youtube in Beyonce\'s billboard awards live video and half time show live video.
>> When I was in first grade middle school, I always watched Beyoncé\'s Billboard awards videos on YouTube.
And then I fall in love in to her.
>> I fell inlove with her.
She\'s live is very powerful and stable.
>> She lives a powerful and stable life.
If I have a spend a time with her, I want vocal and dancing lesson.
>> If I can spend some time with her, I want to do some vocal and dancing lessons.
And I wonder how about the top stars life.
>> And I will ask her what it\'s like to live like a star.
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