If I have a Time
학생이 쓴 원문
If I have a time and money, I want to go the Egypt.
When I high school, I like a history.
I think pyramid is best of best remains of the world.
so If I have a time, Now I will buy ticket for Egypt.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ethan!
I am really interested to go to this mysterious place too! It\'s so marvelous to see where aliens allegedly visit. Although there can be some challenges to go there due to unrest and other reasons from neighboring countries, Egypt remains on top of people\'s list. So I hope you can get the chance to be there. I do too.
Thank you for this homework answer. I shall see you again in class tomorrow!
Take care!
-T. Donna =)
>> If I have time and money, I want to go to Egypt.
When I high school, I like a history.
When I high school, I like a history.
>> When I was in high school, I liked history.
I think pyramid is best of best remains of the world.
I think pyramid is best of best remains of the world.
>> I think that the pyramids are the best of the best remains of the world.
so If I have a time, Now I will buy ticket for Egypt.
so If I have a time, Now I will buy ticket for Egypt.
>> So if I have time, I will buy a ticket for Egypt.
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