If I have an appointment, I will go there on time.

2010-02-05 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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If I have an appointment, I will go there on time. Keeping his promise is very important for his credit. If partner is late in appointment, I can wate an hour with tolerance, but I can't wait more time.

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If I have an appointment, I will go there on time.Keeping his promise is very important for his credit.If partner is late in appointment,I can wate an hour with tolerance, but I can't wait more time.   hi [이름],  here are the corrections made from your  composition....   If I have an appointment, I will go there on time. >>> If I have an appointment, I always go there on time.   Keeping his promise is very important for his credit. >>> Keeping a promise is very important because it will reflect on someone's personality. >>> Keeping a promise is very important because it holds someone's credibility.   If partner is late in appointment, >>> If my partner/someone is late from our appointment,   I can wate an hour with tolerance, but I can't wait more time. >>> I can wait for an hour, but I can't tolerate to wait for another extra hour. >>> I can wait for an hour, but I can't wait for another extra hour.

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