If I have someone...:)
학생이 쓴 원문
I think marriage is very important.
When I older than now, I need someone hold next to me.
Loving someone is very precious and thankfull.
And loving with each other same timing it is like miracle.
So I think marriage is so important.
If I have someone like now, I want to get married right now.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
I think so too. A lot of people actually disagree with this, but I think that marriage is a sacred union. Love is something to be celebrated. :)
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I think marriage is very important.
>>CORRECT
When I older than now, I need someone hold next to me.
>> When I am older than now, I would be needing someone next to me.
Loving someone is very precious and thankfull.
>>Loving someone is very a precious thing that we need to be thankful for.
And loving with each other same timing it is like miracle.
>> Loving each other, at the same timing, is like a miracle.
So I think marriage is so important.
>> CORRECT
If I have someone like now, I want to get married right now.
>> If I have someone now, I want to get married already.
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