If I moved to another country, I would miss...
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
If I moved to another country, I think I will miss my family, Korean foods and Korean.
When I went on a first business trip, it was difficult to hear Korean in the local area.
It was really nice to hear Korean in the hotel pool after 3 days.
So I called home every evening.
And I like spicy food, but foreign food is mostly greasy.
So when I go on a business trip or a personal trip, I always take some red pepper paste and seaweed with me.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sumi! ^^
Everything changes once you take off and start somewhere new. When you first land, it’s normal to feel anxious, scared, maybe even a little sick to your stomach, and excited. Then you blink and months fly by as your feet get firmly planted in your new surroundings. Every day your life starts slowly piecing itself together like the stills of a stop-motion movie.
On the other hand, there are things that we find annoying about our hometown. Everything is not perfect. It would still have flaws and needs changes. :)
If I moved to another country, I think I will miss my family, Korean foods and Korean.
>> If I moved to another country, I think I will miss my family, Koreans, and Korean food.
When I went on a first business trip, it was difficult to hear Korean in the local area.
>>When I first went on a business trip, it was difficult to find someone who speaks in Korean in the local area.
It was really nice to hear Korean in the hotel pool after 3 days.
>> It was really nice to hear another person speaking in Korean after 3 days.
So I called home every evening.
>> I also called my family at home every night.
And I like spicy food, but foreign food is mostly greasy.
>> I like spicy food but most foreign food is greasy.
So when I go on a business trip or a personal trip, I always take some red pepper paste and seaweed with me.
>> CORRECT
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