If I reincarnated
학생이 쓴 원문
If I reincarnated, I really really want born to be skinny body.
my job is musical actor,
Audience watch my show and talk about my everything.
Because I always take care of my body shape.
But I love eat something.
I hate diet😂
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
Some people want to live a different life and some don\'t. At the end of the day, what matters is that we should be contented with the life that we have right now. :)
If I reincarnated, I really really want born to be skinny body.
>> If I am reincarnated, I really want to be born with a skinny body.
my job is musical actor,
>> My job is a musical actor.
Audience watch my show and talk about my everything.
>>The audience watch me on the show and talk about everything that they see.
Because I always take care of my body shape.
>> I always take care about my body shape.
But I love eat something.
>> The problem is that I love eating different kinds of food.
I hate diet😂
>> I hate going on a diet.
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