IF I WAS A WOMAN....
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]!
Thanks for doing your homework.
I\'m happy that you chose to answer this question with total honesty.
There\'s nothing wrong with a bit of curiosity.
I\'m also curious about that. Haha.
Please check my corrections here.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~ ^^
I really worry about what you think after you read my writing but I want to be honest with you.
>> I\'m really worried about what you would think after you read my answer, but I want to be honest with you.
At first, I\'m not a pervert or a gay.... in my thought.^.^;
>> First of all, I\'m not a pervert or gay. That\'s what I think.
If I woke up one day and I was a woman, I would have sexual intercourse.
>> CORRECT!
I\'m not interested in a man sexually but I really wonder how good a woman feel.
>> I\'m not interested in a man sexually, but I\'m really wondering how a woman feels.
I try to understand my wife\'s feeling when we make love but I sometimes realize the limit of understanding her.
>> I try to understand how my wife feels when we make love, but sometimes I realize that my understanding of her is limited.
It would be a very good experience to perform the sex act if my wife and I could change our gender temporarily.
>> CORRECT!
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