If I was the boss...

2014-06-11 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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If I was the boss of the company, I would change mood of organization. I don't hate my boss but the boss needs an ability to gather people and make them do as one people to be a creative organization. The boss who I want to be is friendly person. But it is not mean that a boss doesn't have to be strict in task. When it comes to task, it is very important to propel a project and verify it clearly. After work time, a boss should be the person who can embrace his/her feedback like accepting his own fault while ordering some task or suggestion which can be benefit to our company. To make this situation, I think the boss should open his mind and have a positive think when his subordinates give a feedback or suggestion. a very little thing like changing boss's mind can affect in the mood or group, distribution, and over whole organization.

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Hello [이름]! Thank you so much for doing your homework. I can see that you are doing your best to compose meaningful sentences. Keep up that great attitude of yours. Please mindful of your word order. Always follow the basics. Talk to you in class. Teacher Nina   f I was the boss of the company, I would change mood of organization. >> If I am the boss of the company, I would change the mood of organization. I don\'t hate my boss but the boss needs an ability to gather people and make them do as one people to be a creative organization. >> I don\'t hate my boss but the boss needs the ability to gather people and make them work as one to be a creative organization. The boss who I want to be is friendly person. >> The boss who I want to be is friendly person. But it is not mean that a boss doesn\'t have to be strict in task. >> But it doesn\'t mean that a boss shouldn\'t be strict with the task. When it comes to task, it is very important to propel a project and verify it clearly. >> When it comes to the task, it is very important push a project and verify it clearly. After work time, a boss should be the person who can embrace his/her feedback like accepting his own fault while ordering some task or suggestion which can be benefit to our company. >> After work, a boss should be the person who can embrace his/her feedback like accepting his own fault, order some tasks, open for suggestions which can be beneficial to the company. To make this situation, I think the boss should open his mind and have a positive think when his subordinates give a feedback or suggestion. >> In order for this situation to happen, I think the boss should open his mind and have be a positive thinker when his subordinates give him a feedback or suggestion. a very little thing like changing boss\'s mind can affect in the mood or group, distribution, and over whole organization. >> Even a little thing such as a boss\' change of mind can affect the mood of the group or the whole organization.

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