If I were a butterfly...

A butterfly has a beautiful set of wings. Still, I don't really want to be a butterfly because though I can fly, my life is restricted, but if I were to be, then I'd do the things helpful to others. Firstly, I would be a model for photographers who seek for beautiful pictures. The world of photograph is a lonely trip, and many photographers are desperate for good pictures. By sucking some nectar or flapping my wings while sitting on a flower, I can easily be a nice model that is helpful to photographers. Moreover, a butterfly symbolizes a challenge or success as seen in many songs. By showing my little self to people who are depressed, I can give them hope and courage. To sum up, sometimes, little things can do the biggest things as does a butterfly, so if I were one, I would try to fulfill "the biggest things" that I, as a person, cannot do.

Hi [이름]!^^ Happy Tuesday!   Good job, [이름]!^^ I really like you\'re composition this time. Your sentences were good that I didn\'t want to change the structure anymore. But then, you are fond of really long sentences so try to simplify next time, okay?^^ I\'ll see you in class and that will be next week. Happy New Year!!!   ~T. Mayleen~   A butterfly has a beautiful set of wings. >> CORRECT OR: Butterflies have colorful, beautiful wings.   Still, I don\'t really want to be a butterfly because though I can fly, my life is restricted, but if I were to be, then I\'d do the things helpful to others. >> I don\'t really want to be a butterfly because thogh it can fly, it\'s life is restricted so if I were a butterfly then I\'d do things helpful to others. Firstly, I would be a model for photographers who seek for beautiful pictures. >> CORRECT!   The world of photograph is a lonely trip, and many photographers are desperate for good pictures. >>  The world of photograph is a lonely trip and many photographers are desperate for good pictures.   By sucking some nectar or flapping my wings while sitting on a flower, I can easily be a nice model that is helpful to photographers. >> By sucking some nectar or flapping my wings while sitting on a flower, I can easily be a nice model for aspiring photographers. Moreover, a butterfly symbolizes a challenge or success as seen in many songs. >> A butterfly symbolizes success as ssen in many songs.   By showing my little self to people who are depressed, I can give them hope and courage. >> CORRECT! To sum up, sometimes, little things can do the biggest things as does a butterfly, so if I were one, I would try to fulfill \"the biggest things\" that I, as a person, cannot do. >> CORRECT!