If I were a butterfly.
학생이 쓴 원문
If I were a butterfly I would fly to a flower and drink honey out of it.
If I were are butterfly I would watch out for spiders and spider webs.
I do think it will be a great pleasure to fly in the blue sky without riding air plane.However I am very glad that I'm just me because I am a little afraid of the hight.Teacher Mayleen, what would you do if you were a butterfly?
~~Emma~~^__^ ^__^
Oh!!!!!Iforgot to tell you that next Tuesday is my birthday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^__^
강사 첨삭
Hi EMMA!^^
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!
If I were a butterfly, I\'d fly to places I\'ve never been to ^_^ see beautiful spots I\'ve never seen but I think butterfly can\'t really fly that far :(
We\'re the same, I\'m afraid of heights too. That is why I can\'t ride roller coasters nor do sky walking^____^
Thank you for this composition. I\'ve made some minor modifications.
See you next year!
~T. Mayleen~
If I were a butterfly I would fly to a flower and drink honey out of it.
>> If I were a butterfly, I would fly to a flower and drink it\'s nectar.
If I were are butterfly I would watch out for spiders and spider webs.
>> If I were a butterfly, I would watch out for spiders and spider webs.I do think it will be a great pleasure to fly in the blue sky without riding air plane.
>> I think it\'d be a great pleasure to fly in the blue sky without riding an airplane.
However I am very glad that I\'m just me because I am a little afraid of the hight.
>> However, I am very glad that I\'m just me because I\'m a little afraid of heights.
Teacher Mayleen, what would you do if you were a butterfly?
>> CORRECT!~~Emma~~^__^ ^__^
>> CORRECT!Oh!!!!!Iforgot to tell you that next Tuesday is my birthday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^__^
>> I forgot to tell you that next Tuesday is my birthday!
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