If I were a musician,
학생이 쓴 원문
If I were a musician, I would be Beethoven.
Because he is the one who lived and died for music only.
He was a true musician who expressed his inner feelings in music.
He played music and composed until his death, despite losing his hearing.
So I respect him and love his music.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
I\'m not really into classical music.
However, I can understand Beethoven\'s passion.
It is something to be admired.
The same goes for your writing.
See you tomorrow!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
If I were a musician, I would be Beethoven.
>> Correct
Because he is the one who lived and died for music only.
Because he is the one who lived and died for music only.
>> It\'s because he is the one who lived and died only for music.
He was a true musician who expressed his inner feelings in music.
He was a true musician who expressed his inner feelings in music.
>> He was a true musician who expressed his inner feelings through music.
He played music and composed until his death, despite losing his hearing.
He played music and composed until his death, despite losing his hearing.
>> He played music and composed despite losing his hearing until his death.
So I respect him and love his music.
So I respect him and love his music.
>> So I respect him and I love his music.
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