If I were a superhero....
학생이 쓴 원문
If I were a superhero, it would be a robot with prophecy. The hero I turned into would be able to foresee the future, so that I could prevent bad things from happening. I would help acquaintances to achieve their dreams as well as mine. I would assist the President of my country to make decisions that are advantageous for the national agenda and to execute policies that are coherent and consistent. I would surely use my ability into a good cause because the superpower can be easily misused if possessed by a compromised person. I will maintain high integrity and most of all, I will keep it a secret.
강사 첨삭
Hi Max! Thanks for your homework! and your effort! I really appreciate it! ^ ^
WOW! This one is a well thought and well composed writing. Good job! ^^
-Teacher Jedah
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The hero I turned into would be able to foresee the future, so that I could prevent bad things from happening.
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I would help acquaintances to achieve their dreams as well as mine.
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I would assist the President of my country to make decisions that are advantageous for the national agenda and to execute policies that are coherent and consistent.
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I would surely use my ability into a good cause because the superpower can be easily misused if possessed by a compromised person.
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I will maintain high integrity and most of all, I will keep it a secret.
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